Fourth Imperial Prince and his Magi.

This cosplay has quite a bit of impact, as for the cosplayers themselves, I'll start with Ren, Ren's position and...brightness? i guess you could call it over shadows Judal's so basically, because of their placing the main focus isn't the both of them, just Ren (this is my pov). It's also because Ren is very slightly, standing in front of Judal as well -_-. Ren's make-up is generally quite good, it the sides of the scar should have been blended in a touch more carefully though. The top of the scar is more evident that the bottom. Hair piece should have been painted in a slightly brighter tone. I don't think you can control that though, so i'll let it go. As for Judal, i'd suggest not covering his other eye with hair, it does look like he doesn't have a pupil in his right eye. His pose looks a little odd when put next to Ren and the red might draw some people's eyes in to become the point of focus. Take their personalities into account, n scenes when he's holding an apple, Judal usually smiles wider while ren would have on a much more serious face. Next is the background, admittedly...it does look a little fake because of Judal and Ren's lack of colour and on top of it its blurred. Be very careful to center Judal and Ren, they aren't completely centered and my eyes are draw first to ren then to the background and finally judal. At the moment that's all i can think of, if you think this is too harsh, feel free to mark it under 'unfair'. ...I'm just a bit strict from experience.